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ShootyBear's avatar

I’ve noticed that AI when creating dialogue between two characters is often very abrupt, like it’s running down its checklist of bullet points that you provided in an outline. This makes it feel very unnatural as people tend to ease into uncomfortable topics.

Also, most surprising to me is how AI gets things wrong like a real person does. Sometimes events happen out of sequence even though I provide a timeline/outline of the sequence. And sometimes it “forgets” basic facts about the character/events.

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I've been trying my hand at this using ChatGPT, because you can use the latest model for free, and can keep the session open, even as you run into usage limits. It's been fun and interesting, for a story in my mind for decades. I need to prompt a lot, and sometimes direct it to specific parts of the source material I uploaded, but I find it satisfying so far. Grok 3 is free but left me unsatisfied. You've written very positively on Claude Opus, but it costs, and I'm on a budget.

So far, I don't think my story has fallen into this uncanny valley, perhaps because of its unusual subject. It even suggested some unexpected phrases I found apt.

What other models do you recommend that might be good for creative writing?

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